domingo, 8 de diciembre de 2013

Summer time

Text 1:

Summer is the nicest season of the year. I love summer because there is so much free time to do the entire thing that I want. When I walk by the beach I enjoy listening the sound of the waves and feeling the pleasant sea breeze; also I can feel the sun burning my skin and smell the scent of the sea. I enjoy walking along the beach and feel all those things, and when I travel to the south of Chile is very different than North, because I can see the beautiful, green nature and smell the different scent from the trees and flowers;  the sound changes birdsong and is more comfortable for the ears. I like walking so I see a new world within the forest, wild animals, beautiful flowers, big trees, etc. It’s wonderful, and I love it. My favorite season, I really love summer.


Text 2:

Summer, time of fun and relaxation. I really enjoy summer time because I can do all the things that I like. One of my favorite activities is to go to the beach and swim with my brother or my friends in the big waves, and other activities that I can do in the beach are to play soccer or volleyball and drink ice cream. I love playing those sport and drinking ice creams. I really enjoy Christmas time because I travel to Calama or Temuco with my family and us past the Christmas night with the whole family; everybody are happy and it is a wonderful night. It is the only month that I can see them all together. We like to travel to other cities so in February we start with the trip. It is very interesting to travel a lot because I see different lifestyles and cultures. In the south of Chile I work picking strawberries or harvesting wheat, I love working in those work because it is an activity that I can’t do in the big city. Summer is time to do all the things that you can’t do in other season. I really enjoy summer time.

Text 3:


When I think in summer I always remember a Christmas night where we were in Calama with the whole family. We were 27 members of the family together and everybody was happy.  I remember that night because my father was Santa Claus so he brought a lot of presents; presents that everybody bought. The midnight came and was time to open all the presents so my father took a chair and sat in it and started to call all the members that had a present. Was a very fun moment because all my uncles had to sit in the knees of my father like little kids and had to smile to the photo. Everybody was laughing. Was a wonderful night.  Another special day was a “New Year night “when I went out to the streets to distribute coffee with my friends to the indigents. We started distributing coffee in “El Morro” up to “Baquedano” and when we were there we saw a very big group of those “brothers” celebrating the New Year together, so we came near to them to celebrate with them. We ate, laughed, played and told stories; was a great night. When we were going, one of the indigent that we accompanied got up and approached to me; he told me that I was a very good man and that I deserved good things, and when he finished to told this, he took his jacket and he gave it to me. Was a new jacket. I thought a lot of things but I felt it was better to received it. When I arrived to my home I thought in this entire situation that happened and I felt very good. I understood that sometimes people that with don’t expect and with little actions can surprise you and make you feel happy.

Reflection: These were the last 3 paragraphs that I wrote and now was very simple to write it because I know everything of punctuation, grammar and vocabulary, and  the writing process and these rules have helped me to write a presentable paragraph.

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