My brother Marcelo

Marcelo is a very important person in my life. I love my wonderful twin. He is 20 years old and the thinest of the family. He has brown, short, straigth hair and small, green eyes. When he smiles his big, white teeth appear and make a perfect match with his nose. He looks like a soft person but he is very strong. He has a white skin and a very short ears.His big hands are always wet. I said that he is the youngest because I was born firts. My little brother... I really appreciate him.

My brother is the most kind person in the world. He always make us laugh and sometimes when he is sad or angry, he makes us feel bad with bad words that he says. I admire him because he is a hard-working person and very honest. I thing that he is a very special man in this world. He likes going to the church every Saturday and I love that because we enjoy together with friends and the mass.

Her wants to be a cooker and I think the same because he cooks very well, in fact he is the best cooker. Recently he is very sick. I hope he becomes better...I love him so much and I am very grateful of all the happines that he gives to the family. I really admire him.

Reflection: This was the second paragraph that I wrote and I learned that before to write the paragraph you have to follow a series of different steps like the braindstorming, the first draft, revise the writing, editing, etc.

I also learned about the topic sentence and the important that  it is in a paragraph because is the main idea and everything is about the topic sentence. It was dificult to write because before I know all this things I was writing disordered.