A night Owl

I like the nigth because I don't like the sun...One day I herad that the best things happen at nigth and I think that is rigth. When I think of the morning, I think about classess, chores, noises and a lot of things that I don't like so much and is diferent when the night comes to my mind... Peace, without noise, starts, wind and a lot of good things take me to a special place in my mind for a little moment for myself. I can do everything I want, like going outside with my friends to enjoy in their house, stay with my girldfriend and watch movies, play computer games with my brothers and a lot of activities that make me feel happy, but the best thing that I can do is staying in my room just thinking, without noise, all in peace. A lot of fun activities come to my mind when I think about the night. just try to improvise and get fun.

  

Reflection: This was my first paragraph and was very difficult to write it because I didn't know anything about the writing process or the topic sentence so everything was disordered. This paragraph helped me to know how to write correctly and in very clear way.